And that’s a wrap for Chapter 3, and with a slightly earlier than usual update! Once again, thank you all for sticking with me through this one. I went pretty far off the script at times and I know it got a little odd and gross and over the top and silly. Honestly, I’m not sure how well a lot of it worked, but I had fun with it. Hopefully you did too!
Chapter 4 starts tomorrow!
I enjoyed this chapter soo much! It’s nice to see someone portray sex in a more realistic way. Not that I’ve fallen off the bed, but sex tends to be awkward especially when it’s the first time for one involved 😀 Too often people write first time stories where it’s magical and perfect xP
Thanks, I’m really glad you liked it! It was definitely a lot of fun trying to capture all those little moments that make sex what it is. In my opinion, the best part about sex isn’t how perfect and beautiful it is, but how much you generally have to open yourself up to someone else to have it!
And while a lot this was based on real life experiences, I will admit that I’ve never fallen off the bed either!
I have to remember to be this positive the next time things don’t go smoothly. ?
Writing Josiah’s special type of positivity is a nice change of pace. We only get a glimpse of it here, but hey, he’s still new at it!
I’ve been loving this immensely!! Such honest true to life characters…I’ve grown to love them and this interaction between them.
Thanks, I’m happy to hear that! It’s been such a pleasure to write this scene and I’m glad people have enjoyed it so much, especially since I never intended to actually show all of it!
Those sexy heels. :E
Daniel knows what he likes, and what he likes is one small specific part of the foot. He’s also a sucker for the wenis (y’know, the extra skin on your elbow?)